申请高中的essay范文(美国)

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Essay在国外被称为话题作文或论文,也可以看作是说明文。在申请高中时,都要写Essay。每年一到招生季,美国学校就会收到大量申请。如何让校方对你留下深刻印象?如何让你的申请在激烈竞争中脱颖而出?除了GPA、标准化考试成绩这些硬件指标以外,非常关键的一点就在于你的Essay写的质量如何。本文简要介绍一篇美国高中eassy范文,希望对想要申请美国高中的同学有所帮助。
 

  An example of personal essay:
 

  First of all, it is necessary to know that when I was a child, I was treated as a king-child because I lived alone with my mother almost all my young life and because she was weak with me. I thus have to admit shamefully that I took most advantages possible and that I made a lot of whims. I obtained almost everything that I wished. I was really requiring and tyrannical with my mother but, believe me, I am not proud of it.
 

  Another facet of my personality consists in the fact that I am strongly determined. I have set the most ambitious goals and I am convinced that I’ll succeed. I’ll make all which will be in my power to reach my purposes. In order to give you an idea of my objectives I would say:
 

  “I want to become very rich, famous, well-known in the media and reach the highest spheres of the society.”
 

  It can seem paradoxical, nevertheless I am shy and I have a lack of self-confidence. I think that it began when I was between 10 and 14 years and as I was obese. For this reason, most of the guys laughed at me and annoyed me. I was the big little boy that nobody liked. But now that I grew and that I changed a lot, as you can see it, I try to cure my shyness and to open out myself.
 

  This period was the worst of my life, that’s why I think school didn’t prepare me well for adult’s life.
 

  In conclusion, I would say that they are not the only aspects of my personality. So now, I have said enough, it is your turn to discover who I am, if you want to.


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