雅思写作考官到底期待怎样的argumentative essay?

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中国雅思考生写作平均分为何不到5.5?


雅思写作考官到底期待怎样的argumentative essay?


英国雅思考官argumentative essay范文到底好在哪里?


中国雅思考生在经历了雅思考试的狂轰猛炸之后,大部分成了炮灰(下图表格的分数为证)。其中写作平均分最低5.37,竟然不到5.5分。这也太惨了吧!没有专业老师的指导,大部分考生永远都不明白为什么写作分总是最低呢?为了解开这个谜团,今天Meeloun小编就来给大家分析一下,雅思写作考官到底在期待怎样的argumentative essay呢?我来给大家好好分析一篇英国雅思考官的一篇范文,同学们就知道答案了!

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英国雅思考官关于MUSEUMS AND ART GALLERIES的一篇范文   


You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.


Write about the following topic:


What are the purposes of places like museums and art galleries and how should they be funded.


Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.


Write at least 250 words.


考生们一定要仔细审题,非常重要!首先要看清楚议论文题目问了几个问题?


此题目有两个问题,也就是说考生要回答这两个问题,并且充分解释你的观点。


Q1 What are the purposes of places like museums and art galleries?


Q2 How should they be funded?


没错!写雅思议论文也是一个针对题目做答并加以充分论证的过程。


很多考生其实在审题这个环节已经出了问题,但是考生自己可能还全然不知。


现在我们就来看看,雅思考官是如何写开头段的呢?


MODEL ANSWER


开头


In this essay, I shall explain what I think are the two main purposes of museums and art galleries and how such places should be funded.


雅思考官每字每句扣题开头段机智的导入了Q1和Q2,非常清楚的交代后面正文段落要写的内容。


而很多考生们往往是没仔细审清楚题目,第一段的开场白也是废话连篇。


有些考生甚至山路十八弯,直接把考官弄晕。


记住一定要直奔主题,不要写任何无关句噢~这就是考官想要的开头!

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I think that the main purpose of museums and artgalleries is educational. If people visit them, they can learn about history, about culture and about art. I believe that these kinds of knowledge are useful, even in modern society with all our technology. In many countries,schools organize visits to museums and art galleries to help educate students.These kinds of places are also useful for scholars researching a variety of specialized subjects.


本段在回答第一个问题Q1What are the purposes of places like museums and art galleries?


第一句考官直接给出了段落的分论点,清晰直接准确有效~没有任何无关句!


小伙伴们是否知道一段一定要有一个中心句(一般是一个分论点)呢?


后面还要对你的分论点进行充分的论证,要给足证据。


至于如何拓展分论点?如何写出好的分论点?如何才能论证得当?


雅思写作的提高一定需要专业写作教师的专业指点和看专业的书籍才会事半功倍。


I think that the second important function of museums and art galleries is as a place to relax and develop an interest in the wider world. Many people go to museums and art galleries not to learn something for school or for university, but simply because they have an interest in history, culture or art and wish to spend time developing that interest.


基本同上,这是针对Q1给出的第二个分论点。


本段在回答第一个问题Q1What are the purposes of places like museums and art galleries?


第一句考官直接给出了段落的分论点,清晰直接准确有效,没有任何无关句!


As for funding, I think that, ideally, there should be money from three sources – the government, private enterprise and individuals. The government should support museums and art galleries because of the general educational value such places have. Private enterprise can sponsor certain exhibits and benefit from advertising. Individuals who go to museums and art galleries should also pay a fee to go there, since they benefit from visiting.


本段在回答第一个问题Q2how should they be funded?


第一句考官直接给出了段落的分论点,清晰直接准确有效,没有任何无关句!


In conclusion, I believe that museums and art galleries have two main purposes – educational value and as free time activities – and that they should be funded by a combination of methods – public, private and individual.


(266 words)


结尾段一定要有结尾词喔!准确有效扣题的概括总结,才是得高分的关键。


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