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Name: Xinyu Wang

Gender: Female

Date of Birth: 03/07/1988

Telephone: +86-13761874262, +86-21-66130285


Address: Room 103, Building X1, No.99, Shangda Rd., Shanghai University, Baoshan District, Shanghai, 200444, P. R. China

Citizenship: People’s Republic of China



M.S in Environmental Engineering

Proposed term of Entrance: Fall, 2010



Bachelor of Environmental Engineering

School of Environmental Chemical Engineering, Shanghai University, expected 2010

General GPA: 3.49

Ranking: 1/103

Core Courses: Calculus, Analytical Chemistry, Physical Chemistry, Principles of Chemical Engineering, Environmental Microbiology, Water Pollution Control Engineering, Probability and Statistics, Engineering Mechanics, Environmental Management, Environmental Monitoring, Environmental Impact Analysis, Environmental Ecology




Top-class scholarship, Shanghai University                                     Nov. 2009

Top-class scholarship, Shanghai University                                     Nov. 2008

First Prize of the Contests on Ozone-layer Knowledge                       Oct. 2008

Excellent Student, Shanghai University                                      Sep. 2008                                                      

First-class scholarship, Shanghai University                                     Oct. 2007




Test Date






Aug 2, 2009








Test Date



Analytical Writing

Jun 6, 2009










Waste water treatment, Microbiology



Winter Intern, Shanghai ODS (Ozone Depleting Substances) Office            Jan. 2009 – Feb. 2009

•Assisted with document copy and input

•Reviewed and collated the qualification of filed and signed contracts

•Managed phone calls with local enterprises and factories


Summer Intern, Shanghai Environmental Monitoring Center                    Jun. 2009 - Aug. 2009

•Assisted in water sample analysis

•Conducted toxicity tests

•Helped arrange official files

•Participated in on-site sampling




Sep. 2006—Oct. 2007

Culture and Arts Department, Student Council

Backstage management for Shows

Jun. 2007—Jul. 2007

Social Fieldtrip--Visit “Left-behind children in rural areas in Sichuan

This was rated as one of the best social work project in Shanghai

Dec. 2007—Oct. 2008

Department Director, Environmental Protection Community

In charge of website news, financial management, organized events such as “Care for Animals

Jul. 2008

Volunteer teaching in earthquake affected Mao Xian, Sichuan

Oct. 2008

Participated in Contests on Ozone-layer Knowledge organized by Shanghai Municipal Environmental Protection Bureau and received the first prize



Dec. 2008-Current

Research Assistant, Department of Environmental Engineering, Shanghai University

Treated solid-waste landfill leachate by synthesizing LDH (layered-double-hydroxide)



Natural Science, Music, Dancing, Swimming, Photography, Outdoor Adventures





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Personal  Statement

We’re extremely fortunate

not to know precisely

the kind of world we live in.

—Wislawa szymborska—

So,everyone can explore the world in his/her own way.

I do believe that, to be a distinctive individual in the big world, we should clearly identify what we want to do most; and to be a successful person beyond other folks, we should work out what we can do best. Keeping the faith that only a person with great ambition and sufficient  ability can survive well in present-day society, I struggle perseveringly for updating professional  knowledge and skills which can support my study and future career in dreamful area.——That is my way to explore the world.


Early interest


When I was a little girl, my mother always took me as her audience to prepare work reports. She is in charge of individual finance in a bank. Thus, I have been exposed to financial affairs at a young age and the initial interest in this field generated in what I saw and what I heard.

As time goes by, I found finance was all-embracing and quite stimulating, which increasingly  strengthened my love for it. I’m a very persistent girl, especially in terms of those I extremely dream for. Just as I have always been crazy about the England-style lattice skirts since a little girl, my passion for finance has never diminished during my growth process. Now, I always take the initiative in asking my mother to “report” to me. As a consequence, I can know much specific work in financial institutions.

Current achievement

I’m a senior inHebeiUniversityat present and will get a bachelor’s degree in Economics in July 2010, majoring in Economic Applied Statistics. Our curriculum is extensive, including specialized courses on statistics and other relevant courses such as on finance, accounting, and economics as well. So, I’m rather familiar with the basic theory and practice of finance. Besides, the major I’m learning now requires a high level of mathematics and application of computer software, which enables me to be competitive and competent to further my study in Finance.

In order to get more achievement on my current major as well as my interested major, I got an effective study method thereby making full use of free time——Usually, I focus on information about finance, such as the bank rate or the world oil price, via Internet and library; then utilize  statistical tools to sort and analyze the data, and forecast the tendency——This method is very helpful to consolidate what I have learnt as well as to get new knowledge, and it  fosters my ability of studyong independently at the same time. Coupled with my efforts, I have done well in most subjects, achieving 87.5/100 for the overall GPA and winning the “Excellent Student Scholarship”.

Apart from excellent academic record, I know working experience is equally fundamental. So,  I strived for opportunities of related internships and part-time jobs in different companies. In the summer vocation of 2007, I worked in the QiLu Securities Company at the counter and primarily dealt with some basic service following veteran staff, including opening accounts,  hosting, withdrawing the designate trade and altering customer information,. Meanwhile, I also  learnt from staffs in asset management department about how to analyze market quotation and  develop investment strategies. As a result of these experiences, my ability to solve practical problems was improved, but more significantly, I developed a strong work ethic in finance field.

In addition, I actively took part in school and social activities. Some activities such as drama performance competition and debate competition provided perfect opportunities to show my comprehensive skills and self-confidence; while other experiences such as being the volunteer of 2008 Beijing Olympic Games and a voluntary teacher in local deaf-mute school also enabled me to be more mature and dedicated.

When I was a sophomore, I joined a team to participate in "The Challenge Cup" Business Plan Competition. I was the leader of the unit which took charge of market surveys and feasible sales plans about our productan IPF-based intelligent static electricity removing instrument. Through the investigation and budget estimation, we found few people were willing to bear its high price, and it was also difficult to produce it by financing. That sounded a severe problem, but we didn’t give up. Instead, we worked together to reform the product so as to continue our business. During this period, I realized the importance of communication , cooperation, and perseverance to fulfill my dream.

Future plan

As to my long-term plans, definitely I am desirous of engaging in finance relevant industry like a bank. The greatest happiness is to do want we want to do, rather than what we have to do, isn’t it? So, I will always persist in my dream and never give up.

Last summer, I was required to complete an Academic Year Thesis when preparing for the IELTS test. It’s urgent but I did a good job as well. Then, I realized time was limited, especially when we desired to explore the unknown world. It’s one of reasons for my decision to study inU.K., which means I can be capable to enter society to fulfill my dream both effectively and efficiently. Another reason is that I would like to expand my outlook by experiencing dissimilar cultures and comparing different ideological and cognitive ideas, and only in this way, can I become a person who think independently.

Your university, famous as it is, is just my ideal place for its perfect academic research and living environment. Thus, I sincerely hope that I could have the opportunity to major in Finance at your prestigious university, not only to realize my dream of entering this beautiful and competitive school, but to be well-trained with the specialist skills and knowledge to achieve self-worth in my interested field as well.

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The release of Rachel Carson's Silent Spring in 1960 expanded people's quests to remedy environmental issues. Though a high school student, I was deeply touched by its beautiful but dolorous words after reading this book. With increasing curiosity in those challenging environmental issues, I chose environmental engineering as my major in my undergraduate education. In the college, I dipped into lots of professional information and gradually realized the shortage of environmental professionals inChina. Therefore, a decision was made in my mind that I have to obtain more advanced knowledge to become a college professor who can cultivate more talented people to protect our environment from pollution. Knowing this will bring me a great sense of accomplishment, I would like to join the Department of Environmental Engineering in your college for an advanced degree, as I think that an educational experience at your college will make me better prepared for my future career.(第一段长了点,开头两句话是我以前自己瞎想的,写得不好,不够吸引人,但我不知道该怎么改得吸引人一点。)


Majoring in environmental engineering, I achieved high scores in my specialized courses during my undergraduate studies, which set a solid background of environmental engineering for me. After becoming familiar with the different branches of this major, I became more focused in environmental microbiology and water-pollution control engineering. Being deeply attracted to these courses, I never had to worry about losing my focus in class.(我一直觉得最后一句话很狗血,根本就不能表现我对这个课程的兴趣,删掉的话这段话又嫌短了,不知道能怎么样改改,能不能帮我提点建议呀O(∩_∩)O~。)


During my undergraduate studies, the variety of experimental courses in physical, chemical, and microbiological disciplines also made me familiar with different experimental analysis technologies and instrumental operations. (我感觉前面这句话可以删掉了,对吗?)With interests in experimental experience, I started a research project with my mentor. The main goal of the project was to look into how to adsorb the pollutants in leachate. Using layered-double-hydroxide (LDH), I used low-cost cement to synthesis LDH, which has good ability of adsorbing solid-waste landfill leachate. (这句话前面有个using,后面又有个used,读起来是不是很重复很怪)The leachate contains harmful pollutants and is a tuff problem in solid-waste treatment. We finally obtained promising results from this project and received my mentor’s recognition. What’s more, with this project, I am probably going to have a publication next year. Although this project may seem to just be like solving a problem with solid waste treatment, it actually involved many technologies in wastewater treatment, such as measuring color and testing COD and the concentrations of nitrogen, chloride, and sulfate in the sample. So this study has ultimately benefited me greatly in the treatment of wastewater.


The internship I had during my third year of college with theShanghaiEnvironmentalMonitoringCenterwas a different experience for me. I participated in a project dealing with the treatment of theSuzhouRiver, one of the drinking-water sources ofShanghaiCity. In the biological department of theMonitoringCenter, I worked in the laboratory and analyzed the algae and micro-organisms in water samples from theSuzhouRiver. Through this work, I became aware of the serious pollution in theSuzhouRiver, which could jeopardize tens of millions of people’s health. I also started to feel that, although I had been trained for three years in water-pollution control through a series of treatment methods, the knowledge I had gained was far from enough to solve the emerging environmental problems inChina. Only through further education and research experience can I gain comprehensive, in-depth knowledge to impart to students.


In college, I also participated in the Environmental Protection Community, where I organized a number of interesting environmental activities, such as slow cycling, small animal care and so on. These activities not only improved my sense of teamwork and leadership but also increased my enthusiasm for environmental protection. In addition, I served as a volunteer education aide to teach children in remote, mountainous areas. This unique experience raised my sense of social responsibility. At the same time, it allowed me to practice my teaching ability and provided me precious experience toward being a qualified teacher in the future. In many cases, I interacted with international students, with whom,(改成from whom不知道行不行,因为后面有个with,我觉得挺重复的) I became familiar with the open and free style of American classes. Though it is a different way of learning, I think it attractive, since this particular style can provide me with new ideas to teach.(这段话没有写出具体的时间、地点,我怕人家会怀疑这些经历的真实性,我是不是应该把时间地点写出来?其实主要是我觉得简历上面都写了,这里就相对没有写得那么具体)


After carefully looking through your website about the Environmental Engineering Programs at your college, I found myself now a suitable candidate for a Master’s Degree study. I also think that this program can help me achieve my aspirations for my future career. I have read Professor XXX’s publications and raised great interests in his research field. I believe that my youth and unlimited energy will leave me much room for further development. I also believe that my learning capacity and research interests will inject fresh vitality into the project. With passions and spirits in research field, I also expect myself pursue a Ph. D. degree after I graduated as a Master student. Therefore, I would greatly appreciate your serious consideration of my sincere application. I can assure you that I am an excellent candidate who is suitable for your program.